As simple as this is, I love it! And the fact that you spread it out over the two pages really gives it that feeling from that part in the movie. Watercolors, so much fun to play with!
I have to ask: the Windsor Newton ink you're using? How well does it play with inking nibs? I have to try a different ink for my pen, as the Pelikan ink I've been using just feathers like a moficky, regardless of the paper weight and grain. I'm out to see what others recommend.